She was resting her head against the
palm as she gazed out the dirty, mud-splashed window. Outside, the
sun was shining high in the sky and the warm late September breeze
made her miss the long days of summer. Instead, she was here,
sitting in an uncomfortable, hard desk at a new school surrounded by
people she didn't know. She was shy and school was long and lonely
now that she had moved. She spent her time in class quiet, trying to
go unnoticed in the large, unfamiliar school. Life was rough.
Re-focusing her thoughts, the girl
realized her English teacher, Mrs. Jones, was handing back the first big
assignment of the school year. It had been difficult, quite different
from anything she had done before. The assignment was to re-tell a
specific part of Zora Neale Hurston's Their Eyes Were Watching God
from the point of view of a different character, using imagery and
dialogue to explain the situation. Prior to this assignment, she had
not written many creative pieces and was nervous about her grade,
especially after struggling to write the dialogue in the same
southern voice Hurston did. A perfectionist, she waited impatiently
for her grade.
The teacher placed her thick story
face down on her desk and she opened it, hoping for an A but prepared
for the worst. “Astounding! Superb! Interesting!” were the words
scrawled over the pages of her paper. She received a ninety-nine and
a large confidence boost.
The bell rang and the girl walked past
her teacher's desk out the door. “Samantha," Mrs. Jones said. “I
was beginning to wonder if anything was going on up there, but you
really proved yourself to me. You are an exceptional writer.” The
girl blushed, unsure how to respond to the insulting compliment,
muttered a “Thank you,” and walked out the door, a prideful smile
spread across her face. That paper changed the girl's life forever.
For the first time she dared to admit she was talented and began to
dream about her future.
I like anecdotes and stories because they really charge a reader's mind--and this one-- with the insulting compliment, with the teacher who let her prejudice overcome her professional pride,-- is a good one.
ReplyDelete